Creaking Noises after a Scary movie
i’m scared of creaking noises after watching a
scary movie when it’s finished and mum tell
me to go to bed by my self I get scared
see watches TV and my dad turns off
all the lights. as all the lights are off
it it’s as dark as the hole world turning
off in a tick Creek! ah!
I quickly put my head under my blanket bang! bang!
me closing my eyes thinking about
something that will make me happy.
scratching creek! creek and should I get
out of my bed, no that’s a stupid idea hearing
foot step’s coming up stair’s whispering to
my self somebody please help me.
I should have a little peak to see who
it is yes! It’s mum finally. “mum what
took you so long I was scared I herd creaking
noises”,
“that was me and dad,”
“than what was the banging noises,”
“that was aunts,”
“what about scratching noises,”
“that was our puppy.”
few never watching a scary movie at night.
I like the way you have build tension in your recount by using personal voice
ReplyDeletee.g. creek! creek and should I get out of my bed, no that’s a stupid idea
Creaking Noises after a Scary movie ... Did you hear the noises? Use personal voice to tell them e.g. I heard creaking noises after watching a scary movie...