On cross country the whole school went to alba
cross park to race Mr Barclay said top five go to
interschools .
Youngest to Oldest the year one’s were up first they
warmed up Mr Barclay three two one and than Mr
Barclay whistled they had to do one lap
Then finally it was my turn to race I did a
stretch I was super super nervous. We had
to do three laps Mr Barclay three two one
snap!!! We ran as fast as we could I past
Fraser Connor Also VannI was running with all
my power I let Fraser in front so his mum could
be proud Vann was running with all his power but
I pasted vann yessss!! I came third I was so
happy and proud I shake everyone’s hands to
cheer them up can’t what to next time
Hi Kairo
ReplyDeleteWe liked your story on the Cross Country it was cool to know how you felt about the race and great way to describe how you felt. Just a couple of things you could work on, like some of it didn't make sense, and a couple of punctuation mistakes, but well done, it was a great story and great job for coming third.
From Lachlan and Leyton